Thursday, January 12, 2012

What in the world does this poem mean?

This sounds to me like a student-written piece. It has better-than-average imagery but lacks a tightness and cohesiveness; I see it as a great draft with a few what I call forced rhymes. I could offer ysis, but I won't. In the broadest sense, I see it about the life journey and the end we all reach.

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