Sorry this is the last one of the night, a rewrite, is it finished.?

Sounds just like a dream I awakened from, life and death situation. But I seriously wounded the scorpion and left him in pursuit. At least I was aware. One already compares your writing to a woman, one an opportunity to be noticed, I suggest it's an opportunity for something good in life that makes you grow. (How wrong can I be?) And it sounds finished to me.